Transcript: President Obama's Democratic National Convention speech 47
http://www.latimes.com/politics/la-na-pol-obama-2016-convention-speech-transcript-20160727-snap-story.html
tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:29:08 PM #
Hillary knows we can work through racial divides in this country when we realize the worry black parents feel when their son leaves the house isn’t so different than what a brave cop’s family feels when he puts on the blue and goes to work

Racial divides is a euphemism for "racism", something Barack has said only nominally in his presidency. See Bonilla-Silva's "Racism Without Racists" for more on how this kind of linguistic distancing from the claims to justice in the word "racism" has become central to our current approach to race, racism and inequality. The continued false equivalency of black parents (who also have daughters, I should add) and police officers continues to elide how one party has far more power than the other. But, again, for this audience this is likely very positive messaging. It feels progressive without requiring any sacrifice from anyone but those who are already being sacrificed. That's always a safe bet when giving a speech on a loaded topic.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:27:03 PM #
It’s every American who believed we could change this country for the better, so many of you who’d never been involved in politics, who picked up phones, and hit the streets, and used the internet in amazing new ways to make change happen.  You are the best organizers on the planet, and I’m so proud of all the change you’ve made possible.

We will get old and blasè about it one day soon but Obama's 08 campaign was an amazing organizational feat. Start with Daniel Kreiss' research on social media use and political campaigns for an idea of just how impressive this all was: http://thehill.web.unc.edu/2015/03/04/qa-with-professor-daniel-kreiss-the-use-of-new-media-in-political-campaigns/

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:25:50 PM #
And it’s got me thinking about the story I told you twelve years ago tonight, about my Kansas grandparents and the things they taught me when I was growing up.  They came from the heartland; their ancestors began settling there about 200 years ago.  They were Scotch-Irish mostly, farmers, teachers, ranch hands, pharmacists, oil rig workers.  Hardy, small town folks

We've traveled from the immigrant narrative to white, midwestern, salt of the earth narratives. Barack's multi-racial identity has allowed him to play with authenticity from several, often competing, narratives. Here he chooses one that goes at the heart of Trump's authenticity claim: a "real" (i.e. white) America. Barack reminds us that he, too, has a legitimate claim on white America.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:25:02 PM #
If you want to protect our kids and our cops from gun violence, we’ve got to get the vast majority of Americans, including gun owners, who agree on background checks to be just as vocal and determined as the gun lobby that blocks change through every funeral we hold.

The images of Barack at the Sandy Hook memorial are very moving. It looks like it profoundly affected him and this is about making at least three constituencies see their fates as linked: parents, police officers/unions, and gun owners. That is a very tall order.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:23:58 PM #
  And that’s why I can say with confidence there has never been a man or a woman more qualified than Hillary Clinton to serve as President of the United States of America.

Again, playing to the idea that critiques of Hillary are sexist for overlooking her objective qualifications for President...even when he has just conceded that there aren't any. But, it is a solid line and one heard throughout this campaign. It does some of the rhetorical work of claiming Hillary's campaign as historic for women without centering the fact that Hillary is a woman -- something that does not sit well with many voters.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:19:55 PM #
who’s made me a better father and a better man; who’s gone on to inspire our nation as First Lady; and who somehow hasn’t aged a day.  I know the same can’t be said for me.  My girls remind me all the time.  Wow, you’ve changed so much, daddy. 

This first reference to change. 12 years ago Barack introduced himself nationally using "change" as his key rhetorical refrain. And during his first presidential campaign "change", along with "hope" and "yes we can", became symbolic lynchpins for the democratic party and Obama coalition.

Here, Obama's first reference to change isn't about enacting it but about it acting upon him. The presidency has changed him, even in these superficial ways. It's a pivot that will set a tone for this speech: less about change (the space Trump is trying to claim) and more about consistency. Of course, every challenger to the incumbent party or candidate tries to stake out ground as the change agent. But, there is something particular about Trump's change message that aims both for ahistorical memorialization for the good ol days AND massive destabalizing change in how the U.S. functions.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:17:58 PM #
Hope in the face of difficulty; hope in the face of uncertainty; the audacity of hope!America, you have vindicated that hope these past eight years.  And now I’m ready to pass the baton and do my part as a private citizen.  This year, in this election, I’m asking you to join me – to reject cynicism, reject fear, to summon what’s best in us; to elect Hillary Clinton as the next President of the United States, and show the world we still believe in the promise of this great nation.Thank you for this incredible journey.  Let’s keep it going.  God bless the United States of America.

And with that the first African American President of the United States of America passed the baton to Hillary Rodham Clinton.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:17:11 PM #
Time and again, you’ve picked me up.  I hope, sometimes, I picked you up, too.  Tonight, I ask you to do for Hillary Clinton what you did for me.

Barack calls on that formidable 08 organization to work for Hillary.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:14:54 PM #
It’s the painting I keep in my private office, a big-eyed, green owl, made by a seven year-old girl who was taken from us in Newtown, given to me by her parents so I wouldn’t forget – a reminder of all the parents who have turned their grief into action.

Powerful statement. Also, Newtown's victims are much less problematic than the victims that brought the Mother of the Movement to the DNC just the night before.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:13:47 PM #
We don’t look to be ruled

This is in the running for the best line of the speech. It helps if you know something about the revolutionary war and the civil war. But even without that context, it's a good line for situating Trump's appeal as un-American.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:12:52 PM #
But for all the tough lessons I’ve had to learn; for all the places I’ve fallen short; I’ve told Hillary, and I’ll tell you what’s picked me back up, every single timeIt’s been you.  The American people.

Here, the speech turns into what this kind of speech is more often tasked with doing: Barack says goodbye to the coalition he built and offers to turn it over. He moves from "yes we can" to "yes you all can", signaling that coalition is greater than the personality that has anchored it for ten years.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:11:25 PM #
That’s why anyone who threatens our values, whether fascists or communists or jihadists or homegrown demagogues, will always fail in the end.

Many are going to cite one of two other really good lines in this speech as the ones that sold it. I'm going with this one. The language is probably far too high-minded for it work with the voters the democrats need to win. I don't care. It's a beautifully structured argument that aligns the fascists and communists Trump promises to save us from with Trump himself while reiterating the idea of Trump as a loser who loses. It's flawless.

jeremydean 7/28/2016 7:03:15 AM #

And it directly links the extreme danger of Trump and the danger of extremist Islam, which is about as deep a burn as one can make! (This one immediately jumped out to me as well.)

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:08:52 PM #
in fact, they were the same values Michelle’s parents, the descendants of slaves, taught their own kids living in a bungalow on the South Side of Chicago

And what he Barack added to his authenticity narratives when he married Michelle: the most common black American origin story. Claiming the immigrant narrative, working class white narrative, and the black formerly enslaved "we shall overcome" narrative all at one time -- it makes it hard for any other politician to compete.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:06:01 PM #
You know, there’s been a lot of talk in this campaign about what America’s lost – people who tell us that our way of life is being undermined by pernicious changes and dark forces beyond our control.  They tell voters there’s a “real America” out there that must be restored.  This isn’t an idea that started with Donald Trump.  It’s been peddled by politicians for a long time – probably from the start of our Republic.

Barack walked right up to the line of blaming modern Republican party rhetoric for creating the conditions that created Trump. Instead, he assigns blame to the start of our Republic. But the message is the same: "this was created, ergo someone is responsible for Trump existing and it isn't us".

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:04:32 PM #
She’s been there for us – even if we haven’t always noticed

More allusions to Hillary as a person who does the hard, thankless work that keeps our government working. Stassa Edwards wrote about how the convention speeches have, so far, made visible the often invisible work that women do every day to keep routine life humming along (http://theslot.jezebel.com/last-nights-dnc-was-all-about-the-invisible-work-of-wom-1784382748). Barack seems to be calling out the same.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:02:35 PM #
But she knows that’s what happens when you’re under a microscope for 40 years.  She knows she’s made mistakes, just like I have; just like we all do.  That’s what happens when we try.  That’s what happens when you’re the kind of citizen Teddy Roosevelt once described – not the timid souls who criticize from the sidelines, but someone “who is actually in the arena…who strives valiantly; who errs…[but] who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement.”

And this is how Barack explains the caricature. It's steeped in religious undertones of redemption and forgiveness. We all fail. Hillary has failed. But she has been redeemed and we should acknowledge that especially as her failures have come from her willingness to work hard. It's like answering the interview question, 'what's your greatness weakness?". Barack says Hillary's greatest weakness isn't that people dislike her (that's too negative for a grand vision speech) but that she just tries so hard to make a difference.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 10:00:46 PM #
Look, Hillary’s got her share of critics.  She’s been caricatured by the right and by some folks on the left; accused of everything you can imagine – and some things you can’t. 

Acknowledging Hillary's many negatives among voters. And, like Bill, he adopts the framing of Hillary not being the caricature of her. I wondered if that framing would stick and it looks like it has some fans. But, Barack does something Bill didn't do: he tries to explain the caricaturization in ways that doesn't blame a vast "right wing conspiracy" (google the clinton years, take one for the reference).

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:57:33 PM #
If you want more justice in the justice system, then we’ve all got to vote – not just for a President, but for mayors, and sheriffs, and state’s attorneys, and state legislators.

Barack has called out BLM protestors many times for being too concerned with revolution and not concerned enough about the day-to-day politics of organizing. This is a message aimed at them: get involved in the system and change it at the local level. I will say that whatever one thinks of BLM or how effective they are, the President of the United States has to address their concerns in his farewell speech to the nation in one of the most critical elections in many years.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:55:50 PM #
We all need to get out and vote for Democrats up and down the ticket, and then hold them accountable until they get the job done.

This was a pretty amazing tactical call during a speech genre that is all above high rhetoric. Voting down the ticket, in state and local races is a key concern for organized politics. Barack is using a pretty big pulpit to get the choir to take some very concrete steps.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:54:26 PM #
this business of democracy

"business of democracy" is an interesting phrase. It could be a refutation of Trump's claim that the only business expertise that matters is private sector, rent-seeing business deals. managing the public sector and a massive military is also a business. but, it is also a critical delimitation of what the state is when we talk about it like its a business. the state is, above all, beholden to the public and a business is not.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:52:33 PM #
striving students and their toiling parents as loving families

DREAMers reference.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:52:15 PM #
She knows that acknowledging problems that have festered for decades isn’t making race relations worse – it’s creating the possibility for people of good will to join and make things better.

Oddly enough, after using the race-neutral framing of "racial divides", Obama then calls out a key premise of those who oppose it: naming something that's wrong can never be more wrong than what is being named. Naming a problem is a necessary condition of addressing it.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:47:50 PM #
America has never been about what one person says he’ll do for us.  It’s always been about what can be achieved by us, together, through the hard, slow, sometimes frustrating, but ultimately enduring work of self-government.

This goes back to the inclusive "we" at the start of the speech, drawing a contrast with Trump's promises to unilaterally make all national decisions. And, reminding idealistic voters that democracy inevitably means slow, painful compromise. Not even a President can change that, he is saying.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:46:22 PM #
Our power comes from those immortal declarations first put to paper right here in Philadelphia all those years ago; We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal; that together, We, the People, can form a more perfect union. That’s who we are.  That’s our birthright – the capacity to shape our own destiny.  That’s what drove patriots to choose revolution over tyranny and our GIs to liberate a continent.  It’s what gave women the courage to reach for the ballot, and marchers to cross a bridge in Selma, and workers to organize and fight for better wages.

This harkens back to the convention speech that shot a young Barack into the stratosphere. It is one of his favorite narratives: a linear historical march from progress to progress, never getting into the complexity of how many of these progressive wins happened at the expense of the others or were necessary because those others didn't work. But, rhetorically, straight lines are almost always best.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:44:27 PM #
That is another bet that Donald Trump will lose.

Trump's entire rhetorical framing rests on a single idea: he is a winner. Barack goes after this directly. Saying Trump will lose not just a bet but another bet, suggests he loses often. And people who lose often are losers. Ergo, Trump is a loser. If refrains work for voters, this seems like a good one.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:42:46 PM #
America is already great.  America is already strong.  And I promise you, our strength, our greatness, does not depend on Donald Trump. 

Like Michelle, Barack hammers this idea of America is already great by calling on his authenticity. Who, but an unlikely President like Barack, can authentically say America is already great?

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:41:37 PM #
She is fit to be the next Commander-in-Chief.

The fitness test comes up frequently, evidence of just how stunned many people are that Trump hasn't failed it in the eyes of so many voters.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:40:42 PM #
And then there’s Donald Trump.  He’s not really a plans guy.  Not really a facts guy, either.  He calls himself a business guy, which is true, but I have to say, I know plenty of businessmen and women who’ve achieved success without leaving a trail of lawsuits, and unpaid workers, and people feeling like they got cheated.

I was astonished to hear Barack address Trump by name. Michelle didn't do it. And many others have avoided it. It was entirely conceivable that the sitting president of the united states would leave that kind of direct engagement to surrogates. But, it is also true that Barack has experience roasting Trump.

jeremydean 7/28/2016 7:01:39 AM #

Indeed, and the crowd reacted with boos. which occasioned, in my opinion, one of the better ad-libbed lines of the election thus far: "Don't boo, vote!"

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:37:20 PM #
You know, nothing truly prepares you for the demands of the Oval Office.  Until you’ve sat at that desk, you don’t know what it’s like to manage a global crisis, or send young people to war.  But Hillary’s been in the room; she’s been part of those decisions.

This is interesting. Hillary's never been President and Barack just said that nothing prepares you for being President. Except, he says that Hillary IS prepared. Hillary has been his surrogate at key moments in his presidency, he's arguing. As such she has absorbed the kind of first-hand experience that Trump cannot and will not have the capacity to develop. This is a speech about how much we should trust Hillary because of her key proximity to the Oval office for so long.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:34:52 PM #
Now, eight years ago, Hillary and I were rivals for the Democratic nomination.  We battled for a year and a half.  Let me tell you, it was tough, because Hillary’s tough.  Every time I thought I might have that race won, Hillary just came back stronger.

This message has played well in many speeches. Many women, especially those of Hillary's generation, identify with her resilience. She has survived bad behavior from her husband, attacks on her looks, questions about her fitness, and all manner of things that feel very familiar to some women who have worked for a long time. Barack casts Hillary's badly run 08 campaign as a virtue, more evidence of her resilience (even if it is sometimes a response to self-inflicted wounds).

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:32:45 PM #
There are pockets of America that never recovered from factory closures; men who took pride in hard work

Again, hitting the blue collar white male voter hard in this rhetoric.

jeremydean 7/28/2016 7:17:58 AM #

Hard enough, though? I still feel like the hopefulness of Obama and this convention won't resonate with that demographic. (Whether it should be catered too or not is another questions.) This is a key acknowledgement in the speech, but I think Hillary still needs to make the case for these voters.

This interview is the best thing I've read about what makes Trump so resonant to the white working class. And one takeaway for me was that not only do they simply not feel the hope, but their hopelessness finds a kind of relief in the wildly off-the-cuff critique that Trump offers

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:32:16 PM #
we have real anxieties

It is important to acknowledge voters' concerns but the Democrat's trick is to do so without becoming mired in them. The party who projects the most anxiety probably loses to the most novel candidate...and that's not Hillary.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:31:11 PM #
The America I know is full of courage, and optimism, and ingenuity.  The America I know is decent and generous.

This speech wants to offer a big story for voters. This is a positive story and one that is very different than the current story the Republican nominee has written. Its reminiscent of Reagan's "morning has come in America" narrative. That's likely not an accident. Barack has repeatedly cited Reagan as an influence.

jeremydean 7/28/2016 7:11:16 AM #

And directly cites him later in the speech.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:29:38 PM #
and turn away from the rest of the world. 

It would be very difficult to achieve Isolationism in a global society that has the Internet.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:28:57 PM #
But what we heard in Cleveland last week wasn’t particularly Republican – and it sure wasn’t conservative. 

This is a truly remarkable line. Last night Bill tried to de-couple the "real" Hillary from the caricature of her. Here, Barack does something similar by trying to de-couple the republican party from Trump.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:27:52 PM #
We need to keep making our streets safer and our criminal justice system fairer; our homeland more secure,

Black Lives Matter is all over the subtext in these speeches. Few say it explicitly but there is almost no chance that we'd have a line from the sitting president about the unfairness of the criminal justice system were it not for BLM activists. Here, Barack links that issue to the notion of community crime. That's absolutely an allusion to "black on black crime", or one of the most popular responses to demands from BLM: if you care so much about police violence why don't blacks stop killing themselves?? It's a sign that significant parts of this speech aren't for black voters or BLM activists and sympathizers but with the white, hispanic moderate voters who empathize with grieving black mothers.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:25:15 PM #
So tonight, I’m here to tell you that yes, we still have more work to do.  More work to do for every American still in need of a good job or a raise, paid leave or a decent retirement; for every child who needs a sturdier ladder out of poverty or a world-class education; for everyone who hasn’t yet felt the progress of these past seven and a half years

Hillary's support among non college educated white men is particularly low (although not strange for a modern democratic). Barack is speaking to those voters and the many others for whom the stock market recovery has not meant greater economic security. Even with more jobs, job quality remains a big concern and workers feel that.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:23:46 PM #
And through every victory and every setback, I’ve insisted that change is never easy, and never quick

This is a response to the Republican claim that all that "hopey changey stuff" has been all talk and no action. Barack continues to make the case that this administration's accomplishments would be impressive under any circumstances but in the shadow of the great recession, they are especially remarkable. If he can convince voters of that, Hillary as a continuation of the last eight years becomes a powerful sell.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:21:52 PM #
We put policies in place to help students with loans

Do. Not. Even. Get. Me. Started.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:21:32 PM #
We brought more of our troops home to their families, and delivered justice to Osama bin Laden. 

This was the national security night at the convention. Almost every speaker celebrated bin Laden's execution. It is a scary thing to witness.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:20:51 PM #
401(k)s recover

I don't get much into policy things here but the 401k hustle has shifted more risk from nations and corporations to individuals than any kind of stock market recovery could replace. See: Jacob Hacker's "The Great Risk Shift". But I digress. Political rhetoric is complex, yo.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:19:52 PM #
How could I not be – after all we’ve achieved together?

The inclusive first person plural ("we") was a big part of 08 and 12 Obama's political messaging. He continues it here. Not only is this consistent messaging but it tries to make Trump's message about how he will make America great again sound immature and selfish.

tressiemc22 7/27/2016 9:17:02 PM #
But I was filled with faith; faith in America – the generous, bighearted, hopeful country that made my story – indeed, all of our stories – possible.

Not for the first time Obama situates his personal narrative in the U.S. immigration narrative. This is tricky for black Americans, of course, as many of us are descendants of enslaved people who didn't immigrate by choice but by force.

Read Michelle Obama's Emotional Speech at the Convention 17
http://time.com/4421538/democratic-convention-michelle-obama-transcript
tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:13:28 AM #
a president who truly believes in the vision that our Founders put forth all those years ago that we are all created equal, each a beloved part of the great American story.

Like Corey Booker's earlier speech, Obama paid homage to the great forefathers narrative. That could be about being in Philadelphia. But it's also just a bell one has to ring in politics. I hate that bell.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:10:56 AM #
That is what Barack and I think about every day as we try to guide and protect our girls through the challenges of this unusual life in the spotlight, how we urge them to ignore those who question their father’s citizenship or faith.

Many writers and thinkers have speculated about how the first black family has dealt with the what historian Carol Anderson calls the inevitable "white rage" backlash to Obama's election. Having served her time, Michelle seems more willing to take the criticisms head-on. This is what many of us would call "shade".

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:10:42 AM #
How we insist that the hateful language they hear from public figures on TV does not represent the true spirit of this country.

This line does some work. On one level, it is red meat for colorblind white (and some non-white) liberals who require all black figures to be hopeful (I've discussed this more here: http://www.theatlantic.com/politics/archive/2015/08/between-the-world-and-me-book-club-not-trying-to-get-into-heaven/400271/).

On another level, it is doing some inter-group communication or what Stuart Hall called encoding/decoding and what Mark Anthony Neal translates into "black code" when he talks about Hall's work through modern media cultures. Obama is signaling here that she has noted those who have directed racist, sexist, classist rhetoric at her family. She has taken note.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:09:42 AM #
So, look, so don’t let anyone ever tell you that this country isn’t great, that somehow we need to make it great again. Because this right now is the greatest country on earth!

This is a dig at Donald's nihilism the other night. But it is also saying, hey, there is no great american past. Remember, Obama had just referenced slavery a paragraph earlier. She's making an elegant case that any allusion to the past is necessarily one that is closer to slavery. We are great now, she says, because we are at least greater than that. It is the idea that for black Americans, this country's best days are always necessarily yet to come. It's a stark contrast to the idea that America was only great when, as historian Ira Katznelson said, "affirmative action was white".

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:09:19 AM #
That is the story of this country, the story that has brought me to this stage tonight, the story of generations of people who felt the lash of bondage, the shame of servitude, the sting of segregation, but who kept on striving and hoping and doing what needed to be done so that today I wake up every morning in a house that was built by slaves. (CHEERS, APPLAUSE) And I watch my daughters, two beautiful, intelligent, black young women playing with their dogs on the White House lawn.

Here's the big graf. It does many things. In a night where the hispanic immigrant story was dominant (and will likely remain so in all organized US politics for years to come for practical reasons), Obama reminded us again why this administration has been historical. Again, I suspect we'll hear more of this as they transition into private life and take over managing that Obama legacy.

The graf also linked the historic event of a black family in the white house with the historic event of potentially electing a woman president. This graf bridges the race narrative to the gender narrative, wedding them as equally historic in a way that I think the die-hard HRC fan really, really wants from this election. If, Obama seems to be saying, Barack's election was historic for black people, Hillary's can still be historic for black people...who are also women. Whether one agrees with that assessment or not, Obama rhetorically linked the excitement of 08 to Hillary's campaign, which can sometimes feel old hat because Hillary has been in the public eye for so long.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:08:52 AM #
Heroes of every color and creed who wear the uniform and risk their lives to keep passing down those blessings of liberty, police officers and the protesters in Dallas who all desperately want to keep our children safe.

I don't know if anyone on my social media feeds caught this first go-round. This is her shout-out to Black Lives Matter activists who were protesting in Dallas where several police officers were murdered. She rejects framing of BLM as anti-police, making them peers with police with a shared interest in public safety. It's the kind of framing that many visible BLM activists have been trying to make in recent weeks. It's something to see it here, albeit with a very soft touch, on such a big stage.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:08:41 AM #
I want someone with the proven strength to persevere, someone who knows this job and takes it seriously, someone who understands that the issues a president faces are not black and white and cannot be boiled down to 140 characters.

More hitting at Trump as a vain, small, shallow, ineffectual candidate.

susanvlaws 7/26/2016 7:28:08 AM #

If a business isn't doing well, you can liquidate it, or sell it, let it fail, or start a new one....none of which are appropriate problem-solving approaches to leading a nation.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 7:07:20 AM #
No, our motto is, when they go low, we go high.

More encoding/decoding. She is talking to Trump. But she is also talking to the white rage that Trump has channelled into a presidential bid. It is also an allusion to the cultural history of any marginalized group who must perform superior morality in a dominant culture. This is also one of the strongest lines in the speech. It's when I knew that it would be a bit different than some of her previous big speeches. It takes on criticisms and public discourse head on.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 6:51:18 AM #
Kids like the little black boy who looked up at my husband, his eyes wide with hope and he wondered, is my hair like yours?

For many black people, the photograph Obama describes is one of the most impactful of this administration's entire historic eight year term. It is about identity politics, sure. It is also about representation. Those are two concepts that critical leftists and conservatives are both ripping to shreds these days. I think they're wrong to underestimate the power of representation and when they do it says that they aren't very good at what they believe in. If they were better, they'd realize that they also engage in politics of representation: invisibility.

Regardless, this sounds like an Obama team that is very aware of his legacy. And, I suspect this will be the tone and context of how they'll shape this Presidential legacy.

jeremydean 7/27/2016 11:34:44 AM #

Completely agreed about the underestimation--indeed dismissal--of quote unquote identity politics here, @tressiemc22.

Here's that iconic photograph:

For anyone needing some context on the issues around racial representation, from the bodily to the political,, I'd recommend Toni Morrison's The Bluest Eye.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 5:51:45 AM #
What I admire most about Hillary is that she never buckles under pressure.

I hear this from die-hard Hillary voters in my life a lot: she didn't quit. I suspect that concept has also tested well.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 5:51:23 AM #
but every child who needs a champion, kids who take the long way to school to avoid the gangs, kids who wonder how they’ll ever afford college, kids whose parents don’t speak a word of English, but dream of a better life, kids who look to us to determine who and what they can be.

typical america land of opportunity rhetoric. Each line is crafted to hit key a constituency: college students, latinos/immigrants, DREAMers.

tressiemc22 7/25/2016 9:23:10 PM #
So in this election, we cannot sit back and hope that everything works out for the best. We cannot afford to be tired or frustrated or cynical. No, hear me. Between now and November, we need to do what we did eight years ago and four years ago.

She called out the Obama army to get to work for HRC.

tressiemc22 7/25/2016 9:11:33 PM #
And when she didn’t win the nomination eight years ago, she didn’t get angry or disillusioned.

This was shade at the minority of Sanders voters saying they would never vote for Hillary.

tressiemc22 7/25/2016 9:10:07 PM #
See, I trust Hillary to lead this country because I’ve seen her lifelong devotion to our nation’s children, not just her own daughter, who she has raised to perfection…

This was coming since the set-up of the speech: Hillary is a good mother to us because she has been a good mother of her own child. It's a take on the president-as-nation's-father idea. I read somewhere that it works so fine.

tressiemc22 7/25/2016 9:06:14 PM #
And let me tell you, Barack and I take that same approach to our jobs as president and first lady because we know that our words and actions matter, not just to our girls, but the children across this country, kids who tell us I saw you on TV, I wrote a report on you for school.

This links her narrative to HRC's "our kids are watching Donald Trump" ad. It leads me to believe that this must test very well with potential voters. And, it suggests that Obama was in conversation with HRC camp higher-ups enough to tie her speech into that narrative.

Read Bill Clinton's Speech at the Democratic Convention 32
http://time.com/4425599/dnc-bill-clinton-speech-transcript-video
tressiemc22 7/26/2016 10:04:55 PM #
I actually drove her home to Park Ridge, Illinois… (APPLAUSE) …to meet her family and see the town where she grew up, a perfect example of post World War II middle-class America, street after street of nice houses, great schools, good parks, a big public swimming pool, and almost all white. I really liked her family. Her crusty, conservative father, her rambunctious brothers, all extolling the virtues of rooting for the Bears and the Cuba.

Bill is signaling how far Hillary came from her all white upbringing. It is a stand-in for the many white liberals in the Democratic party who envision themselves as more progressive than their parents and their upbringings. And, it is supposed to make her later work on civil rights seem all the more amazing.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 10:04:24 PM #
The first time I saw her we were, appropriately enough, in a class on political and civil rights. She had thick blond hair, big glasses, wore no makeup, and she had a sense of strength and self- possession that I found magnetic.

Not five minutes after Bill's speech ended, almost every pundit coalesced around one narrative: this was a spouse speech! So, yes, this is a spouse's speech as evidenced by this open. It's biographical. It is designed to humanize. It is homey and romantic. Or, at least it starts that way.

But, being the Clintons, nothing is simple. This opening vignette also recasts bookish Hillary as desirable and attractive. Given Bill's well-documented sexual exploits, this is important.

When I attended a Trump rally this year, I commented on all the slogans about Hillary as sexually frigid and unattractive (https://tressiemc.com/2016/06/15/i-went-to-a-trump-rally/). Women seemed to be some of the biggest purchasers and purveyors of that message. Bill situates Hillary as not only attractive but, initially, too attractive for him to even approach. It's a specific kind of gendering that is even more specific given the Clinton's history.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:50:37 PM #
And so I say to you, if you love this country, you’re working hard, you’re paying taxes and you’re obeying the law and you’d like to become a citizen, you should choose immigration reform over somebody that wants to send you back. (APPLAUSE) If you’re a Muslim and you love America and freedom and you hate terror, stay here and help us win and make a future together. We want you. (APPLAUSE) If you’re a young African American disillusioned and afraid, we saw in Dallas how great our police officers can be, help us build a future where nobody is afraid to walk outside, including the people that wear blue to protect our future.

And this is where Bill continued his recent-ish pattern of losing his green political thumb. This is tone deaf and insulting. Linking Muslims to terror as if they don't exist outside that context is insulting. And the idea that African Americans need to make the future safe for the police when the police are the ones with guns and exploding robots is dismissive, cruel and common. Bill has more deftness than this. He is one of the most gifted politicians in history. When he fails like this it is precisely because he knows how to thread the needle that the failure is so notable.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:48:17 PM #
She sent me in this primary to West Virginia where she knew we were going to lose, to look those coal miners in the eye and say I’m down here because Hillary sent me to tell you that if you really think you can get the economy back you had 50 years ago, have at it, vote for whoever you want to. But if she wins, she is coming back for you to take you along on the ride to America’s future.

I think this was supposed to sound strong. I suspect (and I have limited knowledge of this area) that what he is saying is even true. But it sounded like a threat. In a speech that tried to err on the side of optimism, threats stand out like sore thumbs.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:47:24 PM #
And you should elect her because she’ll never quit when the going gets tough. She’ll never quit on you.

I honestly believe that had he ended this (very well delivered line; he was ratcheting up to religious cadence at this point) with a pause and "because she's never quit on me", the crowd would've gone nuts.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:46:22 PM #
When I was president, I worked hard to give you more peace and shared prosperity, to give you an America where nobody is invisible or counted out. (APPLAUSE) But for this time, Hillary is uniquely qualified to seize the opportunities and reduce the risks we face.

Ok, Bill has to acknowledge their unique political history. But, I thought this reference to his presidency and the video about that preceded his speech was tacky. It was supposed to remind you how much more prosperous you were during Clinton I's administration. Ergo, you'll be as prosperous under Clinton II's administration. Even saying she is "uniquely" qualified doesn't detract from how this argument is structured.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:43:36 PM #
Now, how does this square? How did this square with the things that you heard at the Republican convention? What’s the difference in what I told you and what they said? How do you square it? You can’t. One is real, the other is made up.

Bill frames the caricature of Hillary as diametrically opposed to the "actual" Hillary. Pundits like to say that coming out of the convention the job is to recast the candidate for voters. How do you recast one of the most recognizable, written about, debated and dynastic political figures in modern politics? Bill indicates that it can be done by rhetorically cleaving the actual Hillary from the cartoon version of Hillary. Time will tell if this rhetorical framing sticks.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:40:48 PM #
(APPLAUSE) As secretary of state, she worked hard to get strong sanctions against Iran’s nuclear program. And in what The Wall Street Journal no less called a half-court shot at the buzzer, she got Russia and China to support them. Her team negotiated the New START Treaty with Russia to reduce nuclear weapons and reestablish inspections. And she got enough Republican support to get two-thirds of the Senate, the vote necessary to ratify the treaty. (APPLAUSE) She flew all night long from Cambodia to the Middle East to get a cease-fire that would avoid a full-out shooting war between Hamas and Israel in Gaza to protect the peace of the region. She backed President Obama’s decision to go after Osama bin Laden.

For many of the more liberal members of the party, this recitation of Clinton's achievements as Secretary of State is excessively hawkish. Some people will argue that a female politician has to look tough. And, it is true that it isn't possible to be SoS of the U.S. and not be hawkish.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:39:04 PM #
She worked for farmers, for winemakers, for small businesses and manufacturers, for upstate cities in rural areas who needed more ideas and more new investment to create good jobs, something we have to do again in small-town and rural America, in neighborhoods that have been left behind in our cities and Indian country and, yes, in coal country.

Hitting many constituencies in this graf. Someone on social media noted the strong Native American presence at the convention. It shows up again here. The reference to coal country may be a misstep given Hillary's gaf during the primary about coal jobs: http://www.politifact.com/truth-o-meter/article/2016/may/10/context-hillary-clintons-comments-about-coal-jobs/

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:37:01 PM #
Her early years were dominated by 9/11, by working to fund the recovery, then monitoring the health and providing compensation to victims and first and second responders.

The night was heavy on 9/11 narratives.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:36:24 PM #
fast forward.

Bill's creative and selective fast forwarding is an attempt to reclaim the glory of his pre-impeachment years without getting mired in the scandal that followed. I'm not sure that referencing it would be the negative some people think it would be. The current republican presidential nominee talked about his penis in a debate. Bill's scandals seem quaint these days. The absence may cause more talk than a reference would have. But, nothing's lost here.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:34:36 PM #
And as you saw last night, beyond a shadow of a doubt so has Michelle Obama.

This is called bowing down. Bow. Down. https://via.hypothes.is/http://time.com/4421538/democratic-convention-michelle-obama-transcript/

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:33:44 PM #
In 1997, she also teamed with the House Minority Leader Tom DeLay, who maybe disliked me more than any of Newt Gingrich’s crowd. They worked on a bill together to increase adoptions of children under foster care. She wanted to do it because she knew that Tom DeLay, for all of our differences, was an adoptive parent and she honored him for doing that.

Bill: Hillary will be bipartisan, even though Republicans vilify her.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:33:07 PM #
When I became president with a commitment to reform health care, Hillary was a natural to head the health care task force. You all know we failed because we couldn’t break a Senate filibuster.

This was a very controversial move and maybe the one that made Hillary one of the most hated public figures in modern politics. Here, Bill tries to reclaim health care -- a significant achievement under the current Dem president -- and link it to Hillary's involvement during Clinton's administration. He has to sidestep the negative politics that surrounded this at the time. An earlier HRC campaign video does the same move. It's yet to be seen if this will work. Healthcare has become popular with voters, even those who swear they hate big government. It remains to be seen if voters are willing to give Hillary credit for it.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:30:25 PM #
If you believe in making change from the bottom up, if you believe the measure of change is how many people’s lives are better, you know it’s hard and some people think it’s boring.

There is a lot said about Hillary being wonkish and, therefore, boring. Her campaign, supposedly, lacks excitement. Bill is saying that policy should be boring. Boring here becomes a virtue.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:28:20 PM #
Within two days we had a house, I soon had a job.

This is the second story about buying a house in one speech.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:27:26 PM #
For the next 17 years, through nursing school, Montessori, kindergarten, through T-ball, softball, soccer, volleyball and her passion for ballet, through sleepovers, summer camps, family vacations and Chelsea’s own very ambitious excursions, from Halloween parties in the neighborhood, to a Viennese waltz gala in the White House, Hillary first and foremost was a mother.

You would never know that by this time they were in the political elite and likely had many resources. Instead, this is told like Bill and Hillary were your average two-parent household struggling to run kid taxi services. This is aimed at the reality of millions of middle class parents, especially women, who are primarily responsible for managing their kids' social mobility. All those activities are about making their children competitive for college and stable members of the right social class. Of course, this wasn't what the Clintons were really doing but the story is structured to obscure that fact.

surreptisaurus 7/26/2016 10:40:01 PM #

Oh come on, that's not fair. He literally said "Viennese waltz gala in the White House"! No average two-parent household would find that relatable.

edsu 7/27/2016 9:20:29 AM #

The Viennese waltz is there to make it somewhat believable as a narrative :-) How anyone got through nursing school as a toddler is beyond me!

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:25:05 PM #
And time passed. On February 27th, 1980, 15 minutes after I got home from the National Governors Conference in Washington, Hillary’s water broke and off we went to the hospital. Chelsea was born just before midnight.

Everyone is noticing that this is the first time that it can be said of a Presidential candidate that her water broke. Normalizing childbirth for working women contrasts sharply with footage shown of Trump saying that pregnancy is inconvenient for employers.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:23:34 PM #
And I really hoped that her choosing me and rejecting my advice to pursue her own career was a decision she would never regret.

Bill hits on a sacrifice that will feel very familiar to millions of middle class (especially white) women for whom "staying home" has been a practical option. It also puts into context later decisions both Clintons made to sell Bill's political campaigns as a "two-for-one" deal. If she had chosen his career over her own, the least Bill could do was share a job with her that she would have been smart enough to get on her own.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:21:12 PM #
And she said, boy, that’s a pretty house. It had 1,100 square feet, an attic, fan and no air conditioner in hot Arkansas, and a screened-in porch.

This does NOT sound like a pretty house.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:20:37 PM #
I said I know most of the young Democrats our age who want to go into politics, they mean well and they speak well, but none of them is as good as you are at actually doing things to make positive changes in people’s lives. (APPLAUSE) So I suggested she go home to Illinois or move to New York and look for a chance to run for office. She just laughed and said, are you out of you mind, nobody would ever vote for me.

On one hand, Bill is taking credit for being magnanimous enough to set young Hillary free. On the other hand, he is refuting the caricature of Hillary as cravenly ambitious. "she doesn't even WANT to run", he is saying. That also plays very well with many women who, research shows, are more likely to underestimate their qualifications and abilities as compared to men.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:18:54 PM #
She never made fun of people with disabilities; she tried to empower them based on their abilities.

That's a hit at Trump for mocking a disabled reporter. The ad featuring video of this plays very well for Hillary.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:16:42 PM #
Then she went down to south Texas where she met… (APPLAUSE) …she met one of the nicest fellows I ever met, the wonderful union leader Franklin Garcia, and he helped her register Mexican- American voters. I think some of them are still around to vote for her in 2016.

The Texas delegate mentioned this during roll call. You'll be hearing a lot more about it. Texas has a lot of electoral votes.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:15:48 PM #
Hillary opened my eyes to a whole new world of public service by private citizens. In the summer of 1972, she went to Dothan, Alabama to visit one of those segregated academies that then enrolled over half-a-million white kids in the South. The only way the economics worked is if they claimed federal tax exemptions to which they were not legally entitled. She got sent to prove they weren’t.

The South, especially black voters in the South, are critical in this election. This story tries to locate midwestern HiIllary in the southern imaginary. Segregated academies, by the way, were a widespread phenomenon. Whites used them to redirect public money to circumvent desegregation. Recent sociological research shows how these academies continue to track to patterns of racial school segregation in the south (http://www.asanet.org/sites/default/files/savvy/journals/SRE/Jan16SREFeature.pdf). And, books like Kristen Green's "Something Must Be Done About Prince Edwards County" reveals how this unfolded.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:12:29 PM #
She took a summer internship interviewing workers in migrant camps for Senator Walter Mondale’s subcommittee.

Bill draws out stories that connect to key constituencies. The convention has so far heavily tapped into Hispanic and immigrant narrative. This is part of that.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:11:07 PM #
More to the point, by the time I met her she had already been involved in the law school’s legal services project and she had been influenced by Marian Wright Edelman.

The Edelman connection comes up a lot. I would remind people that Edelman has her own piece to say on that: http://www.democracynow.org/2007/7/24/childrensdefensefundsmarianwright_edelman

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:07:15 PM #
lark she went alone to Alaska and spent some time sliming fish.

Bill checks, I think, four states thought to be in play this election year. He is a consummate politician.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:06:28 PM #
Don Jones. He took her downtown to Chicago to hear Dr. Martin Luther King

If you don't mention Martin Luther King once an hour at a political event a black angel doesn't get her wings in Jim Crow heaven.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:04:24 PM #
We’ve been walking and talking and laughing together ever since.

Summing up their marriage, the one we all think we know, in the way he prefers that we know it.

tressiemc22 7/26/2016 9:03:37 PM #
you’re going to keep staring at me… CLINTON: …and now I’m staring back, we at least ought to know each other’s name. I’m Hillary Rodham, who are you?

It's a charming biographical story. It also indicates how much he values that one trait so many voters seem to dislike about Hillary: her assertiveness. If Bill likes it, we should love it. That seems to be the message.